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:iconnemafronspain:

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Hi there,

Here is a commission of the AWESOME game (that i've never played xD) but I've seen it, and it looks amazing.

As you can see, I've posted all the steps:
1) 4 layouts, finally the first was chosen
2) the sketch with 2H pencil in a A4 sheet
3) the clean lines with a 0,5 mechpencil with 2H leads in a blueline Pro comic board.

OK! I don't think there is any more details to highlight.

RAP!

Critiques


:iconwslafleur:
Hey Nema, since you've requested a critique at this-and I now have the ability to respond accordingly-I figure I'll give you my opinions.

As always you've managed to impress us all with your intense representation of perspective and bold line work. Your art is always very dramatic feeling and I feel as though you're attempting to give the viewers a rush of epic visual pleasure with your angular line work and intricate details. I must say, you succeed in those regards.

This is a critique, so I feel as though I should choose some things I feel could be worked on[It's intimidating to pick something because you're quite skilled in what you do.]

I'd say if there's anything I'd like to see, it would be more textures, which I feel would complement your already great contrasts. Another thing would be the terrain around your characters. I think you could've done something to separate them with a little more distinction, perhaps some light shading, or yet again I suggest texture.

As a closing comment, the debris in the air-probably something that wurm has kicked up-could be a little more distinct. Drawn as they are, they might be mistaken as unintentionally debris that your pencil has kicked up. :lol:

Great work, Nema. :clap: It is, of course, a huge success.
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:iconmytharcana:
Wow! I don't have the game but I feel like I just played it after looking at this great piece! :D Fantastic detail and an amazing collage of all these characters! Really stunning work and I can't wait to see this colored!

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:iconbandanapirate:
whoa, man. How long did all that take you? there's a lot of detail on every character. well done bro.
:iconslawomiro:
Holy shit.
That's tight. :D
:iconmanufc1983:
Gracias por subir todos los bocetos previos, se agradece mucho ^^
:icondjoz:
pffiu! Terrible!

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:iconnemafronspain:
well it took a while, because I had to change some things, The face of the main character in fact.

But I did it in separate days, first day the layouts, then when chosen, half day for the sketch and the other half day for the final lines, and the third day I finished it.

It took a while actually.

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:iconbooom:
AWESOME

Would love to get the hi res of this.
I ll send you a wip of the other piece soon.
Its not done yet but will be soon

-Nic

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:iconmichaelcrichlow:
Freakin' unbelieveable! Love it! :D

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:iconshinnwar:
That is sick.

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:iconbandanapirate:
yeah, definitely looks like the product of a lot of work.

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